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CHOOSE YOUR ADVENTURE
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BOOK WITH ME
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THE PROCESS BEGINS
DEVELOPMENTAL
This is an integral step in the editorial process as it reviews your manuscript through a microscopic lens. It's a complete autopsy of plot, structure, pacing, character, world-building, and much more.
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TWO Read throughs of the manuscript
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EDITORIAL LETTER (15-40pgs) on:
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Genre / Word Count
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Plot / Structure
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Believability of Subplot (i.e., Romance)
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Character / POV / Arcs
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Pacing / Tensions / and Suspense
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World-building / Magic Systems
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etc.
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IN-LINE COMMENTS
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MINOR LINE-EDITING with a focus on:
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Continuity
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Clarity and Readability
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Past vs Present tense
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Active vs Passive voice
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Repetitive language
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BOOK MAPPING
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Provided in the form of a spreadsheet, this is a visual representation of your book’s structure
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ONE (1)-HOUR VIDEO CALL to discuss the feedback (optional)
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MONTH-LONG ACCESS to me via e-mail
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After you've had some time to review the feedback, I'll be available for any questions, brainstorming, etc.
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INVESTMENT: $0.020/word USD
$0.027/word CAD
HERE'S WHAT'S INCLUDED:
MANUSCRIPT EVALUATION
A Manuscript evaluation is a substantive read-through of your novel, which provides the same insights as a developmental edit but without the same microscopic focus. If you're just looking for some feedback, than this package would be perfect for you.
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ONE Read through of the manuscript
You have the option between letter-focused or marginal comment-focused feedback, for each this would look like:
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LETTER-FOCUSED (8-20 pages)
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Up to 20 pages of detailed feedback on plot, structure, believability, marketability, character, etc.
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COMMENT-FOCUSED
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A heavily annotated manuscript with in-line comments, questions, and thoughts.
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Both include:
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40-MIN VIDEO CALL to discuss the feedback (optional)
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MONTH-LONG ACCESS to me via e-mail
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After you've had some time to review the feedback, I'll be available for any questions, brainstorming, etc.
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INVESTMENT: $0.015/word USD
$0.020/word CAD
HERE'S WHAT'S INCLUDED:
FIRST CHAPTER
This is an in-depth look at your first chapters up to 5k. This is a small glimpse at what a full developmental edit might look like, and similarly, offers much of the same in terms of a full and substantial edit of your initial pages.
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TWO Read throughs of the chapter(s) (up to 5k)
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EDITORIAL LETTER (1-3pgs) on:
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Genre / Word Count
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Plot / Structure
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Believability of Subplot (i.e., Romance)
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Character / POV / Arcs
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Pacing / Tensions / and Suspense
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World-building / Magic Systems
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etc.
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IN-LINE COMMENTS
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LINE-EDITING with a focus on:
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Continuity
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Clarity and Readability
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Past vs Present tense
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Repetitive language
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30-MIN VIDEO CALL to discuss the feedback (optional)
**DUE TO THE NATURE OF THE PACKAGE ITSELF, SAMPLE EDITS ARE NOT AVAILABLE