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IT'S TIME TO

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THE PROCESS BEGINS HERE

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CHOOSE YOUR ADVENTURE

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BOOK WITH ME

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THE PROCESS BEGINS

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DEVELOPMENTAL

This is an integral step in the editorial process as it reviews your manuscript through a microscopic lens. It's a complete autopsy of plot, structure, pacing, character, world-building, and much more.

  • TWO Read throughs of the manuscript 

  • EDITORIAL LETTER (15-40pgs) on:

    • Genre / Word Count

    • Plot / Structure

    • Believability of Subplot (i.e., Romance)

    • Character / POV / Arcs

    • Pacing / Tensions / and Suspense

    • World-building / Magic Systems

    • etc.

  • IN-LINE COMMENTS

  • MINOR LINE-EDITING with a focus on:

    • Continuity

    • Clarity and Readability

    • Past vs Present tense

    • Active vs Passive voice

    • Repetitive language

  • BOOK MAPPING

    • Provided in the form of a spreadsheet, this is a visual representation of your book’s structure

  • ONE (1)-HOUR VIDEO CALL to discuss the feedback (optional)

  • MONTH-LONG ACCESS to me via e-mail

    • After you've had some time to review the feedback, I'll be available for any questions, brainstorming, etc. ​

INVESTMENT: $0.020/word USD
                       $0.027/word CAD

HERE'S WHAT'S INCLUDED: 

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MANUSCRIPT EVALUATION

A Manuscript evaluation is a substantive read-through of your novel, which provides the same insights as a developmental edit but without the same microscopic focus. If you're just looking for some feedback, than this package would be perfect for you.

  • ONE Read through of the manuscript 

You have the option between  letter-focused or marginal comment-focused feedback, for each this would look like:

 

  • LETTER-FOCUSED (8-20 pages)

    • Up to 20 pages of detailed feedback on plot, structure, believability, marketability, character, etc.
       

  • COMMENT-FOCUSED

    • A heavily annotated manuscript with in-line comments, questions, and thoughts. 

Both include: 

  • 40-MIN VIDEO CALL to discuss the feedback (optional)
     

  • MONTH-LONG ACCESS to me via e-mail

    • After you've had some time to review the feedback, I'll be available for any questions, brainstorming, etc. ​

INVESTMENT: $0.015/word USD
                       $0.020/word CAD

BOOK NOW

HERE'S WHAT'S INCLUDED: 

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FIRST CHAPTER 

This is an in-depth look at your first chapters up to 5k. This is a small glimpse at what a full developmental edit might look like, and similarly, offers much of the same in terms of a full and substantial edit of your initial pages.

  • TWO Read throughs of the chapter(s) (up to 5k)
     

  • EDITORIAL LETTER (1-3pgs) on:

    • Genre / Word Count

    • Plot / Structure

    • Believability of Subplot (i.e., Romance)

    • Character / POV / Arcs

    • Pacing / Tensions / and Suspense

    • World-building / Magic Systems

    • etc.
       

  • IN-LINE COMMENTS
     

  • LINE-EDITING with a focus on:

    • Continuity

    • Clarity and Readability

    • Past vs Present tense

    • Repetitive language
       

  • 30-MIN VIDEO CALL to discuss the feedback (optional)

**DUE TO THE NATURE OF THE PACKAGE ITSELF, SAMPLE EDITS ARE NOT AVAILABLE

INVESTMENT: $100USD /Flatrate
                          $135CAD / Flatrate

HERE'S WHAT'S INCLUDED: 

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ADDITIONAL PACKAGES

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Line Editing at its most simple is a line-level look at your manuscript. A meticulous review of consistency, clarity, and correctness in terms of style and your overall authorial voice. 

HERE'S WHAT IS INCLUDED:
 

  • LINE EDITING
    ($0.017c/word USD/ 0.023c/word CAD)

    • Passive vs. Active voice 

    • Past vs. Present tense

    • Dialogue structure, including dialogue and action tags where needed

    • Repetitive words or phrases

    • A measure of Show vs. Tell with specific in-line examples

    • Overall readability of the manuscript

    • Clarifying ambiguous or vague language

    • Correction of qualifiers and filler words

    • Sentence and paragraph transitions

    • Uniformity in voice, tone, and style

    • Identifying potential inconsistencies

    • Over-explanation of character action

    • Ensuring correct POV usage
       

  • IN-LINE COMMENTS & FEEDBACK

  • EDITORIAL LETTER with a detailed outline that highlights focus areas

  • 30-MIN CALL WITH ME to discuss feedback and answer questions

  • MONTH-LONG ACCESS to me via e-mail

Copy editing is the final lens taken to your manuscript before the pages are typeset. It requires a surface level look to ensure your text is error-free.


 

HERE'S WHAT IS INCLUDED:
 

  • COPY EDITING 
    ($0.0058c/word USD/ $0.0079c/word CAD))

    • Spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors

    • Adherence to the Chicago Manual of Style, 17th Edition

    • Consistency in formatting (e.g., italics)

    • Accuracy of headings, page numbers, headers, etc.

    • Consistent formatting (font, size, style)

    • Dialogue structure and punctuation

    • Word usage (e.g., affect vs. effect)

    • Consistency in terminology, names, places, descriptions, etc.

    • ​Deletion of unnecessary words

    • Proper use of time (e.g., time notation and consistency)

    • Checking for accuracy, where needed

  • IN-LINE COMMENTS & FEEDBACK

  • STYLE GUIDE with a list of terminology and spellings specific to your story and characters.

  • MONTH-LONG ACCESS to me via e-mail

This package is for self-published, or even trad published authors, who want to know more about their audience. Marketing is a formidable tool that can truly set you apart in an oversaturated market.

 

Determining who your audience is and how to market to them isn't as simple as a single viral #BookTok video. There's a lot that an author can do to better understand how to navigate social media, advertising, and marketing as a whole.  

An analysis can answer:
 

  • Who are they? (defining your target audience)

  • Where can you find them? (this isn't as obvious as one might think) 

  • What other niches might overlap? 

  • Information on hashtags, how to use them to get the best results 

  • Where should you be advertising to have the farthest reach? 

If you're curious to learn more, here is Rebecca Thorne, author of Can't Spell Treason Without Tea, after she and I discussed who and where her audience might be. 

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